Writing 1 | Activities | Ms. Leni Marlina |
Descriptive | My self | |
Process 3 |
My original way
Every body have different characteristic and physical each person. That is why we are looking very different. Each others have something special that do people not have. I am a person who is positive about every aspect of life. There are many things i like to do, to see, and to experience. Sometimes it is hard to introduce myself because you know myself so well or so bad that I do not know where to start with. Let me give a try to see what kind of image you have about me through my self-description. I hope that my impression about myself and your impression about me are not so different. Here it goes.
My name is Gusneldi Andrya Putra and usually people call me Aan or Andrya. I am a male who was Born on August 3rd 1993 in Padang Panjang. Now I live in Solok city, exactly in Sumani. I have been living in Sumani since 1998 with my family. I grew up in the great nature that is making me a good person.
Some people say that I have good appearance. I have tan skin and curly black hair. I think I am good looking. I have medium weight and tall enough which is around 168 centimeters tall and 44 kilograms weight.
I like playing basket ball once a week with my friends. I has learned play basket ball since 4 years ago, exactly when I learned in the Senior high School. I has a team basket ball when learned in the senior high school. Now, in the college, I seldom play basket ball because I have many assignment and full schedule.
I can play some instrument music like guitar, bass , drum, et cetera. I learned these instrument music from my brother. He teaches me all things that he knows about music when I was a kid. He is a good brother for me.
I also like to write a song when I do not have any activities. Usually, I write song in the midnight because my mind will be so well and I can express all things in my mind. As long that, I have written around 7 songs. Now, I still try to make a better song for all people.
That is all about me. I like all things about music because music is rhythm in my life. I also to be as i am and do not want to be another person. I must go on to make all of my dream come true because my dream still alive.
Hi My Little Brother,..
BalasHapusYour essay is good enough,..
I am interested about it,.
But, I still find a little bit mistake in grammar using,.
ex: "I has a team basket ball when learned in the senior high school"
I think it's good to you to change it with "I had" because occured in the past, right?
That's it,..
So far so good,.
Just keep writing,.
:)
"many things i " (paragraph 1 line 3)
BalasHapusI think it has to be capital letter...
and pay attention to use article to make your essay more colorful...
that's all from me...
thanks and keep writing..
I can play some instrument music
BalasHapusyou should add s in instrument
that from me and see you next
Aan..
BalasHapusyour essay is good..but, i found a mistake..
"I has learned play basket ball since 4 years ago" (pararph 4, line 2)
the correct is: I have learned play basket ball since 4 years ago
give comment back Aan..
Dedek Aan,
BalasHapusPlease pay attention with your grammar because I found some mistake about grammar in your essay.
That's all from me.
Keep writing. :)
By the way, thank you for your comment on my blog.