Kamis, 26 Mei 2011

Musician from Japan



Writing 1
Activities
Ms. Leni Marlina
Descriptive
My Idol

Process 5


Musician from Japan

Musician is someone who composes or conducts music as a profession and plays a musical instrument. I have an idol as a musician of J-Rock music who likes to play instrument music like guitar, bass, and drum. The name of my idol is Suzuki Akira.

Suzuki AKira
Suzuki Akira is a musician from Japan who has stage name is Reita. Suzuki Akira is a male who was born on Mei 27th 1981  in Kanagawa, Japan. Now, he lives in Osaka with his family. They are mother, grandmother and older sister. His father died when he was five years old.

Suzuki Akira is a personal band of The Gazette. He is responsible in bassist. He was joined with the Gazette since 2002. The Gazette has became the bassist of Japan. He likes to write songs for his band. In The Gazette he has write some songs which title Filth in the Beauty, Before I decay, Regret and many other. He is a musician and the bassist of rock music in Japan.

Suzuki Akira has a good appearance. He is usually wears a T-Shirt and Jean. His hair style is Harajuku style with yellow color. He has an oval face, a pointed nose and white skin. He has medium weight and his tall enough. He is around 172 centimeters tall and 60 kilograms weight.

Suzuki Akira also has a unique style in his face. He often wears a bandanna in his nose when he perform in a show, take pictures, interviewed, et cetera. So, we cannot see his face always wears white bandanna because he likes white color. I think, he is good looking and so cool when he is wearing the bandanna.

Suzuki Akira has a good personality. He is a sociable who likes to help someone. He is low profile and easy going. It would make people respect to him. He is also a friendly person likes to make friends. Suzuki Akira also has bad personality. He is a moody person. He look so bad when he get angry with something.

The hobbies of Suzuki Akira are swimming and watching movie. He often swims every Sunday morning with his friends. He likes watching romance movies if he has free time. Suzuki Akira likes to play basket ball. He has a basket ball team when he was learning in Senior High School.

Suzuki Akira can speak some foreign languages. He can speak Spanish, Chinese, Korean, and English. He has learned these languages from his mother. You know, he likes to speak English when he is interviewing by reporters. Event hough the reporters talk in Japanese, he answers the question in English.

Suzuki Akira is great bassist and good musician of Japan. He is my inspiration in my music. That is why i admire him as my best idol. Suzuki Akira is the best of the best.
 



3 komentar:

  1. Well..
    Your essay is good enough and I have checked it before,..

    Let see
    "He look so bad when he get angry with something"
    I think it's good to you to change it with "he looks" because Reita is singular, right?

    That's all,.
    Just keep writing,..
    :)

    BalasHapus
  2. He was joined (paragraph 3 line 1)
    I think the correct one is "he joined" or "he was joining"

    "has became" (paragraph 3 line 2)
    I think the correct one is "has become"...

    so far so good...
    just revise it to make it perfect..

    BalasHapus
  3. Dedek Aan,
    Your essay is good and I'm in one opinion with Sabil and Giya.

    But let see.
    In paragraph 2 line 3, you write "They are mother, grandmother and older sister."
    I think be better if you change it with " He live there with his mother, grandmother, and oldest sister. "

    That's all from me.
    Keep writing. :)

    By the way, thank you for your comment on my blog.

    BalasHapus